A stick cracked underneath my foot alerting everyone and everything around us. I walked on not realising what had happened. As soon as my foot collided with the stick people materialized from nowhere and started chanting. The result being a disturbance of the leaves below me. They rose, glowing from their resting positions on the ground then formed a fist. The fist came crashing down narrowly avoiding me but hitting my friend. Just then I realised the magicians had gone but did not care. My friend was lying on the ground. I ran over and looked into his eyes. Those glassy eyes.
“NNNNNOOOOO!” Silent sobs shook my body
“I will get my revenge.” The words echoed finally stopping. “I will get my revenge.”
spooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkyyyyyyyyyyyy, when did u menchon the magitions
ReplyDeleteGood work,Well written. Any chance you're making a part 2?
ReplyDeleteThis is a really well written work keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKade
Doem good vocabulary choices.. Vivid verbs ( alerting, collided, avoiding). It is interesting that you have only included a few adjectives (glassy, silent).
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alice's comment. This is deserving of a part 2.